Very original piece. I love the lements you have put behind this. Structure and brushing looks great. Except for some parts on the top, kinda make me uneasy about it. Overall I think this is a wonderfull abstraction. Keep it up.
Not bad at all! The concept is very nice, but there are two things that bother me. It looks too empty at the bottom background. And also, those flying dots on the left near the bottom. What are those things? Sounds very strange. But everything looks very nice. Also try more colors and make this "real"